Mr. Paul,
please comment on this for my blog journals.
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Cute Puppies
These puppies are so adorable
About Me
- Bibi's radical things
- Some may think i'm weird but i'm not. I just know how to have fun. I go crazy (hyper) around my friends and I love having fun and laughter.
3 comments:
Bianca,
You did a good job for your first online journal blog. You identified a theme and discussed it quite clearly. One thing I would like to see, is more detail. Your entry was quite small considering you had all week.
Good start.
Mr. Paul
Bianca,
You made some good comments. However, your last sentence is incomplete.
Mr. Paul
Bianca,
Well done on noticing and commenting on the differences. I do think you could have written more and in depth.
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